I quite like reading your poems. They are interesting and the rhyming is always awesome!!!

I swear from what I have read - have you ever thought of writing a children's novel? It would be awesome in poetry form and I am rue the kids would Love it!!!

Something to think about

I do love this piece. Very simple, elegant and free spirited...very nice!

I find poetry forms a little tough and these days often shy away from attempting them.
However this was cute, the rhyme scheme unusual and flow was good but not perfect,
seemed a little strained, which is my problem with rhymed poetry forms.

But good attempt,
cute as I said

Your rhymes for some reason makes me smile.
Well done,

A tiny fairy can also look scary.

No doubt that you are the king of rhyming, this is so sweet and delightful to read :)

Keep it up Michael :D

Ha! This was so cute! I think u can just about nail any type of poetry form u want to!..the rhymes were common ryhmes but cute in these tyypes of poems! Good job!