Comments : Bitter Sweet Memories

  • 12 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    I love this poem. Theres pain in your flow of the poem that draws you in.

    You can tell this poem is written from your heart, them not understanding. Visualizing as you explain why.

    Love it hun(:
    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Kuro

    They Don't Understand
    What It's Like To Be Free
    They Live In The Dark
    With No Eyes To See
    They're Mind Covers Their Heart
    They Can't Just Let It Be

    this was my favorite part. a lot of truth in this stanza. but remember that there is no 1 way to see the truth. do not blind yourself to their version of truth. keep open minded.

    thanks for sharing and keep writing :)

    ~Kuro