Comments : Yemanja

  • 12 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    I am speechless.... Beautiful piece!!!!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    I am speechless, too.
    thanks for all the information you incorporate in ur poems... you start with something small, and always end up with BIG BIG pieces.

    :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Lostlove1

    I love when you write the godesses into your poems and your rhyme was awesome and flowing as well. IDK but I wanted to cry when I was reading this piece, not sure why lol. Your poems move me in such a way dear Karla-It would be a shame to the world if you ever stopped writing.Love to you Karla
    Lostlove

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    Karla you really describe things beautifully in your poems

    The rhyming was wonderful and flawless and you really made this Goddess sound like a Goddess.

    I loved the description at the end. It was so nice to read this poem and learn more about what inspired you to write it

    Well done

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