This is kinda funny the way u wrote it but it's great and fantastic I loved it and the flow the rhyme is fantastic :) a great write very wonderful and delightful ,,I believe u are a great writer :) 5/5

Ouch, parang ganyan lang din ako.. nice write! :D

Thankyou! :)) hehehe

DAMN dis is funny but i got point :P
i loved the way you put it :P
well done :)

LOL! ikr. :)))