Comments : Apology To The World

  • 12 years ago

    by Ms Happiness

    Thats great:) 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Jenna Bella Oldridge

    This a really strong write. I am sure many people will relate to your writting. I loved how you titled the poem with something simple and honest.

    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Chelsey

    I would ask, "How are you doing today?"
    Because in the past I always
    left out that kind gesture

    ^ Thats so sad. Often times we get so caught up in our lives we forget to ask others about theirs.

    I would take off my suit of armor
    and show you all how truly scared I am of life.

    ^ life is scary! But we are in charge of our own actions and life is what we make of it, I'm sure others are scared too and the best thing about telling people your feelings is they can help you through your fears.

    I liked this poem. I bet it felt good to vent. Its a reminder to the readers that we all make mistakes and that happens often! Don't let it get you down, an apology is always the best way to start to get over it.
    Good write!

  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    A sad poem written with a talented pen. It created thoughts and fears within the reader along with hope. I believe it had it all .

  • 12 years ago

    by Xanthe

    "Iwould take off my suit of armor
    and show you all how truly scared I am of
    life."
    I think we all have that 'suit of armor'. But it's okay to be scared 'cause sometimes this life's just plain cruel.

    "If I could write a apology letter"
    a--an

    Great write. 5/5 Keep writing :)

    -X