Awesome !

Thank you.................So very much.........

Amazing so much emotion in so little words
-Angel

Thank you so much

Excellentuseofverbs andfeelingimagery

Excellentuseofverbs andfeelingimagery

I love your title, very creative poem.

Funeral of my rose
--the title really caught my attention.

"Their is nothing but you in vain"
their--there

"Why can't you rise above and be with me,
Talk to me and let me free???"
It seems like your perspective is a dead person's mind...

I like the idea and concept, but with a title as attention-grabbing as that, to be honest, this poem fell short. Still good, though, so keep writing :)

-X