Comments : Funeral of my rose

  • 12 years ago

    by Rachit Bhanage

    Awesome !

  • 12 years ago

    by CryingHeart

    Thank you.................So very much.........

  • 12 years ago

    by Angel

    Amazing so much emotion in so little words
    -Angel

  • 12 years ago

    by CryingHeart

    Thank you so much

  • 12 years ago

    by victor dyck

    Excellentuseofverbs andfeelingimagery

  • 12 years ago

    by victor dyck

    Excellentuseofverbs andfeelingimagery

  • 11 years ago

    by Exotic Rose

    I love your title, very creative poem.

  • 11 years ago

    by Xanthe

    Funeral of my rose
    --the title really caught my attention.

    "Their is nothing but you in vain"
    their--there

    "Why can't you rise above and be with me,
    Talk to me and let me free???"
    It seems like your perspective is a dead person's mind...

    I like the idea and concept, but with a title as attention-grabbing as that, to be honest, this poem fell short. Still good, though, so keep writing :)

    -X