Simply beautiful<3

Beautiful, you did a great job conveying how you feel and the words you used to express yourself is real talent. Keep writing!

Thank you very much, I really appreciate the praise. Very motivating

Awesome!!!!!!!!!! Each line captivated me... I do love a powerful start...

"Rusty chainlink thoughts pass slowly through my mind"

^^^ love this !!
a metaphoric delight packed with wonderful imagery... each line drew me in....well done!

I'm really glad you enjoyed it, Maple Tree.