Such depth and emotion in this poem and a very well written collaboration. The poem is so well written you would not think that it was two minds that came together as one!

I love the first stanza - the use of the words snowflakes to describe someone and how they would become. I love this because Snowflakes are individuals and no snowflake is alike. So the idea that this person will transform into someone completely different without you? Well written

I love how you said murdered a thousand times before and then in the last stanza - you wrote you'll survive a thousand years more. You connected these two so perfectly.

The poem started off so sad but then ended in a positive note that you became your own complete person without her. Like a snowflake as well.

I think you have both done well with this poem.

Awesome write!!!

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WooooooooW!
You guys really work well together, its just a really smooth and wonderful collab.

Loved the descriptions, the wordings, and the images you reflected so vividly.

Great job guys :)

I see a flawless poem, filled with emotional value, with images that clearly touch the reader. Excellent collab, you two did a great job.