My gosh this piece is fantastic! The descriptions are terrific and the word choice is stunning. This piece is just excellent! Ill leave a real comment soon, I promise, but for now just know that this piece captured me. I was pulled in with the title and the piece itself is so interesting. Dont ever ever stop writing cause this is far too good.

Thx for ur comment and im working on new one

Ohhhhhhh I have to say this poem was just breathtaking.... and powerful doesn't give this poem enough justice... I really did feel a huge charge of emotion while reading this..... wow, wow, wow....

on a technical note:
The last word... did you mean to say peace?
I am notorious for typos and I do love it when fellow poets bring it to my attention....

I look forward to reading more of your poetic gems in the future...
take care~

Thx for ue words i hpe u like it