Awww!!!

Firstly Dogs are my absolute favorite animals

This poem was so lovely and it made me smile and think of my own dog

"I did not raise her but she loves me the same"

I love this - I assume you adopted a pup while they were older. It is so true though they love you unconditionally.

"She shivers and pants at the same time"

I could have sworn you were writing this poem about my dog. She shivers when she's scared and piddles when she meets someone new

I really enjoy this poem!!!

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Ha! great poem. clever and fun! We have a german shepard that is such a good dog and great companion

I adore this piece... what a precious write.... each line flowed sweetly.... and I visioned a precious little pup.. bouncing around... just very cute piece..

I love this Michael D, you are super awesome maaan :)

A tiny suggestion to continue the flow:
"She shivers and pants at the same time."
Could be like:
"She shivers and pants somehow at the same time."

And
"I'm sure she wiill be loyal to the end,"
^^
Take off the double "ii"

Great job.
<3

Really nice