I jus loved d whole idea mattias..ful credit goes to u..
Fp..

Uhmmm, Mattias. I absolutely loved this. What I loved and thought was so different, was that usually a poem written to a diary has form to it. Either a rhyme scheme or some sort of same syllable count, this, this was just literaly like a vent into your diary. I loved that about it!

I may have been Blessed
by an Angel,
but God knows, sometimes
it feels more like a Curse

^^ I loved those lines. Thats incredibly sad!

This was a great write. Good job with the chellenge.

Dear diary,
I met her again today,
and I was once again
reminded of her Beauty,
her Grace, and her
unparalleled
Kindness

--- first of all, this one is an amazing beginning. It gives the reader an introduction and can easily start picturing the scene. I found the word unparalleled to be a perfect choice of word. Unparalleled that its not comparable or equal, just exceptional.

But alas, diary,
it wasn't all Good,
it wasn't all Joy
because now I am left with
an aching heart
and a mind in despair
knowing that it can never be

--- In this stanza, I can feel the disappointment of the author. It feels like the author was floating in soft clouds when he finally met his angel and then he slowly fell down to the ground to just realize the sad reality.

Why? Why, diary?
Why have I no self preservation?
Why do I have no control?
My mind is clear, and
my knowledge is absolute
But my feelings are
relentless force
And they give me no pause
Constantly battering my senses
Constantly battering my thoughts

--- My thoughts on this one are that the author wonders why can't he fight for what he wants or rather loves, why does he stops when he feels that there is no chance left? if the author believes that he has the most important features to obtain what he likes. Except that his thoughts and senses are the one's that constantly ruins it for him. Rather, I could call them insecurities.

God dammit, Diary,
I may have been Blessed
by an Angel,but God knows,
sometimes it feels more like a Curse

---- True, I think many can relate to this stanza.

*Sigh*... Forgive me,
beloved diary,
I guess I just had to let
Some of it
out.

---As for this stanza, I don't find it as strong as the others, But overall, I like this piece specially the first two stanzas.

Love love love this poem very good[:

Cant wait to see if this wins the club contest or not... Good job and good luck

Cant wait to see if this wins the club contest or not... Good job and good luck

This piece is priceless... I do love the heartfelt emotion and expression you have pured out into this piece.... very nice ~

God dammit, Diary,
I may have been Blessed
by an Angel,
but God knows, sometimes
it feels more like a Curse

i understand how this one goes competely. Great poem

I think your poem is good, your expression and awareness is mature for your age. thank you for this poem. using your diary was clever and thoughtful.

I felt like this was half sad, and half grateful. wonderful piece. left me thinking.