This poem is extremely well written, though it doesnt seem sad, thats just life... Anyway excellent poem. But its hard to critique something that is perfect

Oops sorry for the double post

Awww Matt this is such a great, inspiring poem!!

I like how it started out sad and real... you expressed raw emotions, things that people can relate to, hitting rock bottom... but I love that you ended it positively, and how we need to pick ourselves up when bad things happen, because there really are people are living worse and their lives are much more difficult! We should always be thankful for what we have :)

Thank you for inspiring me with this poem! Great job! =D

I agree with pinky princess. :) its nice to see u around again Mattie :D you are such a great person,,hugs smile with rainbows and sunshine for you spread this everywhere. :) hugs 5/5

A poem of realism the sadness the pain and the inspiration to go on. Excellent write

Matt to the rescue! (: haha, anyway. Brilliantly written; I know that feeling when I walk by people who look so down on their luck and I feel... Changed on a bad day just by imagining the reasoning they look ready to give up.

5/5

-Heather