That seems to have been penned from deep within your core. Well written about a confused and painful relationship. Shouldn't be that way.

I really like the subject matter... I agree, I think most of the time when we say we're fine we're actually lying to people and ourselves... there's always something deeper we're feeling that we're too scared to talk about..

Your poem was really well-written! It actually reminded me of a poem I wrote called "I'm Fine." The subject is similar :)