I am sorry about ur dad and this is a wonderful poem and may God be your guidance through it all

This poem is great Sarah, you really brought it to life. The way you described everything and every word you used made it possible to actually picture it, but compared to what you saw I'm sure this is only a mere glance for people wo read it. It must be so hard for you and i wish you, your father and your family all the best. Just try to stay strong Sarah because if your Dad sees that you do he will too. Sorry Sarah!:(...Much Love
Leah

wow this was a great poem..even though its real im very sorry about your dad...but when i read it i had tears in my eyes the hole time

wow..im shocked..but my shock its probably nuttin compare to urs. cuz u lived it im just readin it..it is a great poem though im sorry about wat happened to u
luv...Vicky

this poem really touched me,

MaTt