Hi thank you for your comments. I simply enjoyed reading this poem -good imagery/ must read it again and again.............to apprciate its depth . Well done !

Though I do not grasp the exact meaning of this, but I love your figurative language and how you connect ideas.

Thank you for the clarification!!

now I understood the 'glass hour' and the matter of 'time' .... it seems more interesting now.

Maybe we age, but our souls can still be young as a 5 years old.

Great

Within the cavity is a cinnamon kiss
laced with a crocheted silhouette
designed to dance around a dark room
as my guardian spirit of grace.

That stanza is beautiful. Crocheted silhouette unique and creative.
Loved the whole poem