Comments : The Way You See Me

  • 12 years ago

    by Ms Happiness

    A great poem wuth true feelings:)
    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    People judge without cause, they ridicule and tear one apart not given the time to really know someone.
    Your poem speaks it perfectly. Well said and well done

  • 12 years ago

    by Ellie Kate

    Oh the ever dreaded mother in law, I do believe so many of us have to deal with that. After all we are taking their boy and he is now a man in his own knitted family. I'm sure some day we will be those evil mother in laws too!

    that I may not be perfect or...

    Pardon the critique, I do believe or should be "nor" as it is a negative. Your emotion here is absolute and that's hard to deny. Hope you got the vent you needed through this piece. Thank you for commenting on my poetry. I appreciate it.

  • 12 years ago

    by ronel mccarthy

    I love the line 'through an open heart' so true. The way she sees you is a reflection on her character and inability to love unconditionally .

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    If she doesn't like you, it's her problem..... you're one of a kind, but she seems not. maybe a time will come when she would know that she was wrong...

    great true emotions Liz, great..

  • 12 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Oh mercy! this poem touched me deeply.... I'm sorry that you have to deal with such pain... It is a sad reality when your not accepted by your in laws.. and often times this happens... it breaks my heart... You have written a sad and emotional piece here, that is truly heartfelt. Hold your head high, continue to love her son and love yourself, and my hopes are in time she will see the beauty in you... again, touching write~

  • 12 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    Ugh, your mother-in-law does not sound pleasant. I'm sorry you're made to feel this way.

    "You should be seeing me through an open heart." This line is so pure and touching, because it's true. As humans, it is only in our nature to judge - but there is a line and we have control over our actions and how we follow through on our first opinions of a person.

    "I know that I may not be perfect nor... beautiful." -- Please don't ever say or think this. Correct, you will not be perfect, but nobody is and nobody should expect you to be. You are, however, beautiful. We all are, and never, never, let anybody make you feel like you're anything but.

    I obviously don't know for sure, but I suppose your mother-in-law may just have reservations about you because she's never given herself the chance to get to know you, maybe? I hope that the future may bring you closer, that you can both open up to each other so that she can understand that her feelings towards you are not justified.

  • 12 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    Wow great poem and it feels I definitely relate as known by my poems,,hugs and ur a great person so don't care too much on what she thinks of u,,ur way more than nothing :) 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Joy Helberg

    This is great! I myself had some kind of experienced like this anyhow well done

  • 12 years ago

    by Mostafa

    Well done : )
    I have nothing else to say for they have said it all
    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Jenna Bella Oldridge

    I can't believe your mothering law makes you feel this way. It makes me angry when someone makes me feel this way so I can only imagine how you feel.

    I have to be honest I loved this poem as it came off so honest and open. A sad write but it was very well worded

    Excellent

    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by sniper

    So sad... :(