Good job again sonia(:

Good rhyming choices in there, really appealling. Great job!

Heart Touching !!

Lovely !the sweet memories stay forever !

Omg you write the best sad poems.
This is so sad but I loved reading it
Well done hun

100/100 from meeee <3

Beautiful words with the perfect flow

Simply structured & with simple words...yet so deep. Very nicely written.

all the best and take care

Well Written