This was a great poem. Had a lot of emotion displayed here. And don't give up. We all hit rough patches. Chin up. Nice write. :)

Good one here, angst ridden in some ways but really good. I really like the whole structure of your poem, nicely done, like in a song, the biginning, middle and end was placed really good. Great job.

Really good poem :) 5/5

Great poem, keep it up. And never give up

Great poem! Keep it up