I think sometimes it's great to take a risk cuz u never know what the future holds and things sometimes never unfold until someone makes the firat move or something like that an amazing write I loved it 5/5
10 years ago
Dang. The emotions are here so well written and the word choice is stunning. Excellent piece
I love the first stanza, it really captivated me, and I love this part "holding her pillow close to her heart" .. it was so significant, showing how she's lonely, or looking for love.. it moved me!
I love how you described this woman... she just seems perfect and lovely... it was sweet imagery that any girl would be flattered by your words!
And the last two stanzas were sad... and made me feel for this person... who wants to be more than friends with her... and if this is a true story you need to go for it! instead of waiting and just being the friend :)