You may not be sure of the poem but it is magical and delightful. Full of beauty and passion. The words you use the way you've put this poem together is utter amazement! Very strong, inspiring, and allows the reader to reflect on their life and value and appreciate life. Makes me want to reach for my dreams because you never know how much time you truly have in this life. 5/5 Excellent!

I'm still blown away by you using grammar!! Haha. Anyway.. I agree with Chevalier des Fleurs.

You may not be sure, but I'm sure it's all true and we really have to think everyone does have an expiration date. This poem really captures all the features of how people react to death and thoughts of their own expiration date.

5/5

-Heather

Wow, Holly, I think this is one of your best poems... It was so real, so sad, yet so true. It really touched me, and I know how much this means to you, but it's also something many people can relate to because we've all lost people that we love and cared about.

Well done with this poem dear!