Wow so..powerful... I almost felt like I was dealing with the death right along with you. Powerful.emotions and this is my favorite stanza:
"Heart tragically breaking apart, wishing I was able to Enter your body reviving you back to life, to take Away this suffocating pain in my chest, feeling this Vibe overcome my body that you aren't in pain anymore, Endlessly wishing I could take a staircase up to heaven."

Sorry... My droid won't copy the last line; I'm not sure why that is, but it's annoying. -.-

5/5

-Heather

OMG !!

I felt like I am standing right beside you when you heard it. You wrote it in a way that the reader can feel exactly what you felt. So powerful and deep.

One of my favs from you.

Keep it up sweetie :)

Awww this is so sad
I can feel the pain u went threw jus by reading the poem... it was powerful

Amazing 5/5 frm meee sweetie <333