Comments : Aaaaa... rhyming scheme "HABBIT OF SLEEPING"

  • 13 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Very nicely done. It had humour in it along with message. Though it being a tough rhyming scheme yet none of the word sounded as forced.
    Great write.

    Sharing my opinion: Reduce the title of poem just to 'Sleeping Habits' & mention the rhyme scheme below your poem.

    all the best and take care