Comments : Love gone; Lost sun

  • 13 years ago

    by shellfish

    I like this poem but i found it very heavy and almost dry. but i love the last stanza and think the rhyming is good.

    • 7 years ago

      by kuchicki byakuya

      yah, it must've lacked creativity but its wonderful altogether.

  • 7 years ago

    by kuchicki byakuya

    Its so sad... great writing.