I like it :)
Don't try to hard to rhyme though. Some of the best poems out there are ones that only rhyme sometimes or not at all. Very good poem!

I^^ so true but it was still an amazing poem

Wow! I so much like this, one can easily relate to it. So touching and amazing. She must be an exquisite girl to deserve such a peachy piece :-). Jazakallahu Khairan.