Absolutely amazing, and your completely right... especially with how you decided to use an angel turning bad due to hurt and pain...
I love it!

Wow i love it
people may look/act like angels but in reality we hurt. i love how you showed someone so pure actually hurting. Everything is not as it seems and this is a perfect way to show it i love it. definetaly going into my favs and i am so recomending this/you to all my friends :)

An angel is perfect and I like the way you used an angel in your poem as someone who can also get hurt like everyone else. Shows that this world's unfair. Just something that didn't sound right (to me, at least):

"This town pales compared to her glow,"
-> I'd rather it was, "This town's pale compared to her glow"

But anyway, maybe it's just me.. It's a great poem 5/5 :)

-X

Amazing poem very touching :) 5/5