Comments : Misery Is My Master

  • 12 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    Wow girl.
    this definitely shows everything you told me about last night.

    How the sick game he is playing hurts & why is he dancing towards you if hes the one playing. You can feel what your writing & you can visualize this in your head.

    The flow may be a little rough, but barely & i love this poem.

    Amazing job as always<3
    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    "Youth appearance apparently pulling him in,
    For another girl to just have a moment with,
    Then drag her heart beneath his feet"

    Seems you have penned a monster. A dark poem and very sad, more then you have revealed as it seems it was written from a vivid imagination.