This was amazing ... how we forget about such beauty ...

for the warmth
as gentle
as a father
cradles a frightened child.

i really like the ending because warmth
can also be happiness and there no
safer warmer or happy place to be
then in fathers arms there hero.

Very well written :-)

Beautiful images here!!!

I loved it ... especially the last stanza which is unbelievably sweet

Well done hun

x

Sometimes we forget what appeals to our senses -the warmth and security-memories that surface as a reminder of the essence of life . Lovely imagery .

I like this style its completly different