I loved the simplicity, it conveys loads of joy and happiness, well done : )

Hi thanks much appriciated

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ole

I found this poem to be very beautiful. May favorite part was the very beginning:
Beneath the shadow of your wings
You protect me against storms
Nor wind nor rain can hurt me

Very lovely

Hi thanks for your kind comments
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ole

Hi expressions of emotions is your area

Hi

Thanks for the kind words, I hope emotions is all peoples area, as you state

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Ole

I think that the title is absolutely great and eye-catching!
I also liked reading this poem, I'd just recommend you to add some punctuation because that'd make reading even more pleasureable and easier for the reader. :)

Hi jenni

great comments, I learn by each comment

I will try to put in some ,, .. ;; and :)
best regards
Ole