Comments : I Could Build Your World

  • 7 years ago

    by Bridges

    Enchanting, Charming and Inviting, to say the least!!! This is a wonderful poem. Seductive yet sweet and promising! How I would die to hear this said to me!!! :O Haha But Anyways, Lovely write, Kenny. :)

  • 7 years ago

    by Kips

    Thanks.

  • 7 years ago

    by Ronel McCarthy

    'Override your tears' .......you would do so many positive things if given the opportunity .........creating / building . Lovely write

  • 7 years ago

    by Yakori bint Muhammed

    This is really terrific and endearing. I love how you kept your transitions from each stanza intact with a smooth rhythm. Beautiful and in depth wording, KUDOS! More thoughts to your writing. Blessings to you.

  • 7 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    I really like this poem, it's very sweet and romantic. 5/5