Comments : My last farewell

  • 12 years ago

    by Chelsey

    This wasn't made for not writing in a long time...

    I think what youre going to hear from readers is:
    Don't capitalize each line of every stanza..I know people say it makes the poem a little harder to read.
    Theres also a lot of repetition in this poem. Repeating words usually weakens the poem a little, then again I see thats the way you actually wanted your poem, you purposely did that so I didn't mind it so much.

    The sadness and tone in this poem was definitely felt. I'm sorry for your loss!
    Chelsey

  • 11 years ago

    by Yrem Crish

    This poem is really sad...full of emotion but some parts contribute of none vivid sort of lines. But, I think this is your style of writing as what Chelsey said. Nonetheless, I can picture out the message behind this..I can sense the feeling conveys in the imagery and I enjoyed reading. Keep it up more:)

  • 6 years ago

    by Abstract Poet

    Beautiful poem.