Potent ! You beautifully conveyed the psychological impact of the violation .......the woman decides to abort as it is an option for which she must take responsibility and live with......in the end she 'fades away' .......very sad !

That gave me chills

Very sad. But engaging. Good job.

Truly amazing and chilling 5/5 :)

Thats really sad :(
But its well written 5/5

Oh my that's tragic ... such gruesome images, chilling piece indeed.

Wow
So sad it's amazing(:
5/5

Wow... speachless cuz i know about abortion and all that ive misscarried 2 of my children now but i have one and she will b four april 17th :)

This poem goes deep into the heart of the situation that is common. Abortion leaves a huge scar on that woman, and its heartwrenching to have this happen. I think you conveyed this girl's pain and went into her thoughts. very sad, and grusomely true. i liked the truth! Honesty ususally does best in poems!

That was amazing. Very sad. 5/5

Raw emotion. very sad. very sad indeed. depressing even.