Comments : The Day

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    I think you meant eternity on the last sentence
    Or he is ready to be with us eternality.

    He ^is ready to be with us for an enternality.

  • 12 years ago

    by Lauren denbow

    This a really good(:

  • 12 years ago

    by Rihanna

    Really good poem
    5/5