Comments : Don't Give Up Life's Fight My Close Friend

  • 10 years ago

    by Treehugger

    Wow Cathy I read this WHOLE thing and it made em get teary eyed. where do I start wow. First of all I love how you made a story out of something so deep. Every line is getting deeper into something so sad and the downfall of this friend of yours. Its always reassuring to have a friend when you are down.

    I am glad you wrote this, every line is detailed perfectly I can imagine myself there and feeling your love and friendship.

    I love the lines 'you felt trapped inside a bubble, made by your own thoughts' That line is written perfectly and it speaks truth. We all feel like we are in our own bubble trapped and never being able to get out of our thoughts.

    I also love the lines " you miss your boyfriend, you miss me your best friend". That is also very true. Its hard being alone with sadness.

    At night it is also hard being alone when you isolate yourself from everyone. Your words are perfect and speak beautifully to the writer sadness. 5/5 no question!