Comments : Ripped Off

  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    I enjoyed this very much.
    More truth in this than meets the eye. Nice flow and clear as to what you are trying to convey.

    "Looking for the little girl with cravings
    She seeks but no answers came calling
    Lost into the realm of conceit vanity "

    Excellent stanza

  • 12 years ago

    by Yakori bint Muhammed

    Thanks for the comment. This is relatable to any girl/lady. :-).

  • 12 years ago

    by abuzubayr

    Oh my yakori oh my amazing mashallah, please keep writing, your inspiring me very much

  • 12 years ago

    by Yakori bint Muhammed

    Thanks for your comments, much appreciated. Blessings.