Wow definatly has your voice and emotion. The words are simple yet seem to carry massive meanings... And its so well written. Great job

I think on the last stanza and last sentence you meant to write lose rather than loose.
:)

It's a sad piece and somehow I can relate.

Thanks u 2 :)

Just a few typos....first stanza "threw" should be "through"
Last stanza "loose" should me "lose"...

Other than that this poem is so full of love for one person yet so sad because they don't feel loved back..Thats a sad situation to go through...
the best thing to do in these moments, is one keep writing for yourself, and two talk about whats bothering you..nice write!