Walk-talk,life-fife,stage-rage, Its good rythme u've made taking shadows as the lives apart...u've writen it shortly nd in a compact manner''
Surely defines the phenomenon !
Itz 5/5, good work !

Really good. I love this.(:

I loved sweetie(:

5/5 again:)

I think your poetry is good keep up the good work and keep writing well done. the more life experiences you have the better your poetry will become but keep writing