Very sad indeed. something I hope no one really has to live through.

My suggestions are to edit a few things. Capitalize your I (i) it just makes for a better look and a smoother read.

good job

I'll read that again some other time because I find this such an amazing piece..

Thanks guy...amazing psyche..kudoz

Omg thats reallys sad:( sry

I would still be laughing with her.
I would not be writing this.
This is the way I feel it.
Her death was all because of my drunkeness.

<My favorite piece of the poem. Blaming yourself can be so easy to do.
I hope this isnt something that really happened :[

so sad yet beautiful :] Great writing!

5/5

Wow. This poem is so awesome, really beautiful. I have nothing to say about this but to appreciate. Good job:))
~C