Rhyme and flow perfection, wording magical

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"Ageless, faceless flame

I dare myself to bleed.

Thou shalt understand

desire sleeping in a seed.

this was magnificent...Loved it

STRONG and flickering...................... ;)

Reading this poem was so enjoyable! It flows and rhymes so very well that it can be read with ease. I also love the context, very well written!

Great poem hun!

I love the rhyming - it flowed so well.

I also love the way you spread out your lines. It makes me think that it slows the reader down rather than rushing through the poem. As if each word is supposed to be savoured.

I also loved your words Io ti voglio bene which I had to google to find out the meaning lol but I love it when I search things to understand things better.

Well written hun!

x

This is a perfect poem, I really enjoyed reading it:)
5/5