Hmm... This piece is interestong. Deffinatly emotional but not so descriptive and the word choice is kinda bland

Thanks i havnt wrote a poem in a while still getting used to it but thanks anyway

Wow this is an amazing piece. Great job.

Thank you i worked hard on it im a little out of practice but i try :D

Nice tried. The Emotions are felt.

Thanks it makes me feel good to know that people feel what i feel i try so hard to write good poerty
:D

Good stuff bro

Im a gurl

Lol to the two comments above me and this was a great price I could totally relate to this

Thats goo i was trying to go that direction