Straightforward, you should show your dad this, maybe then he might get it into his mind. I know the feeling, but i think if you did this poem a lil bit more in stanza format it would be better :)

Thanks, but even if i did, he wouldnt change.
And thanks for the crituques. (:

Seems like a sticky situation. . not sure if the wife ur referring to is ur mom? doesnt sound like it, but i'm sorry about the situation.. Keep writing, it helps a lot :)

My stepmom. And I have to write, or I will lose it.

Aww girl dont leave the world i would b soo sad!! ur an amazing poet and i would love for you 2 msg me n e time day or night at my email ( i always have my phone on me) so i will reply if u need to talk!! i will pm it to u if needed

Thanks. Same goes for you.