Comments : Ducks take shortcuts

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    How lovely is this!

    I love how you're talking bout nature and animals. Ducks are gorgeous especially when they are small - little ducklings so cute

    I love how you incorporated human interaction with the duckings.

    Especially when you have said that she has come up to you asking you to state your purpose or to leave. Oh brilliant!!!

    I love this!!!

    x

  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    I have always found the duck ponds to be a place to release my worries. I would sit for hours and feed them or just watch.

    You penned this with knowledge, maybe I have seen you there pondering your worries as well.

    I am adding this to my favorites, it's just a delight.

  • 12 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    I loved the narration, the waddling of ducks, the description and the interaction.
    Loved the imagination :D