Uhmm.. I think you where trying to make a senryu or a haiku...

The first sentence has if I'm not mistaken 6 syllables rather than 5.

I know the real you === Real is made up of 2 syllables. I used to think it was one :)

Yeah Luce,I checked and you are right as always.I can`t believe I didn`t know that.Guess I`ll have to pay more attention in(or get myself to attend more classes of) ENG103.