Hi hun,

This poem saddened me quite a bit.

From what I understood you were writing a letter to your daughter asking her to forgive you for your life and how you have felt during your life?

I was glad about that note in the end with the name - though that is what saddened me the most - I read it as though you feel you are not worthy for the love?

I may have interpreted it wrong though!

Awesome! Really touched my heart.

x

Wow that great, it touched my heart too:)

"Will you ever forgive me
for my poetic ignorance and romantic wings?
My life is half lived.
Maybe it is a collection of wreckages
and useless things.
I can't live to see clearly
who I am
or what is in my name."

It took my breath away..you are amazing

Will you ever forgive me
for my poetic ignorance and romantic wings

^^ this question has got to be one of the most incredible penned questions Ive read in a very long time, maybe ever...That was sooo beautiful.

I don't think poets should have to apologize for their poetic side, our ways of deep thinking, or being romantic. Its an art. Its beautiful...

Any mother who made mistakes never wants their kids to make them and they want their kids to forgive their past, I hope your daughter does, I forgive my mom for hers. It was before me, before you had a clear mind, stuff happens, which is why we learn from mistakes.

This was such a sweet write karla! Very nicely written!

This poem is filled with so much sincerity and though it's so sad, I wish it didn't stop. I can feel how personal this is and that you reveal some hidden parts, but it didn't feel forced, it rather felt relieving.

Absolutely brilliant Karla!

You don't know the fact.... the fact that whenever I feel loathsome, I go and read your poems..

Hecate
Origami
Little Red Riding Hood...........

and now, this.

You really have a way in making me nostalgic and vulnerable. The greatest pleasure in here is seeing you in TKR, posting each time a poem. Well, I hope you post only two poems per week because I cannot but nominate them!!!!!<3

God bless you and your daughter. It's not a compliment... but to me, you're perfect.

Karla-

This is now one of my favorites by you.... I read this piece 3 times now.... and I still have tears in my eyes... Being a mother of daughters I can relate and this poem is just ......... breathtaking....well done~

This a very emotional poem, all i can say is its Exuberating. I'm speechless. Very sad and evocative, amazingly written. KUDOS! May the blessings of God be with you and your family.

Very honest and emotional poem. Emotion profoundly described. Nice one.

Very honest and emotional poem. Emotion profoundly described. Nice one.

I was drew into this poem by your title choice. What a very moving poem, I am sure it will be related to well with all the mothers out there and also maybe mothers to be.

Beautiful job.