"The pessimist grades od decayed pains.
Scars of nowhereness my heart,
Emptiness now that it bleeds......
Moments injust so felt alike:
Torchers they claim me all time.
Day by day everyday I Die-"

WOW. that was an intense sad poem :( really held deep emotions. . . . I really felt them..... you portrayed them well.. nice work :)

Goodness rachit, your poems are so sad, this one is so good i literally wanted to start balling my eyes out! 5/5, amazing job!

Wow very sad...touched d heart whch is proof of n execllnt piece! Good job!

This poem is very deep and had many layers to it. I felt every word you wrote and I just couldn't help but be moved by your words

5/5

Strong words that explain the emptiness that may end in death .:)

Really emotional. i like it, deep, sad. awesome write

Day by day everyday I Die-

This really speaks to me, a very dark place I feel when I read this. It speaks to the inner darkness in me.

Amazing read. Look forward to reading more. Cheers! *adds to favourites*

A bad poem is a poem that mentions many adjectives and verbs without letting the reader know what the title has to do with the lines.

Aww such a deep poem......

That is both awesome and intense. :)

Very sad , deep , emotional poem 5/5

Beautiful poem

Loved it brief and very powerful 5/5