Woah dark poem indeed, but well written,

I love how you mentioned the heart being silent as if it means death is near.

Well done!

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Thanx

Nice dark write. It left me wanting more.
Good job Shanky

Thanx eagle.

Shanky :) I like this write from you because it's technically a new category you're writing. Great choice!

Thanx guys great encouraging power

The last stanza is so eye catching. I read it multiple times. And it's so beautiful.

The second part of the last line (but they won't be tempted) really adds to darkness of the poem.
please do write more poems of this genre.

-cheryl

The last stanza is so eye catching. I read it multiple times. And it's so beautiful.

The second part of the last line (but they won't be tempted) really adds to darkness of the poem.
please do write more poems of this genre.

-cheryl

The last stanza is so eye catching. I read it multiple times. And it's so beautiful.

The second part of the last line (but they won't be tempted) really adds to darkness of the poem.
please do write more poems of this genre.

-cheryl