Comments : Avoiding the Serpents

  • 12 years ago

    by Ronel McCarthy

    Lovely imagery -flow created by the rhyme scheme......alliteration .

  • 12 years ago

    by Moonlit Candles

    Wow this was a very powerful poem. Really enjoyed reading this. Caught my attention the whole way. This part:

    The Eve of my life was long since buried
    Before I would have a chance to be married
    But what if had not the heart to even try,
    To be tempted at least once before I die ?

    Really captured your poem with that person you never got to be with described here. Nice write. :)