Comments : Destroy

  • 12 years ago

    by Xionide

    I like your emotion in this poem, it does speak, even when we're down and out, we hold on because we have too.

    "Beating fast yet weary
    and I do not feel a thing,
    but a dusting of pain
    on an empty heart."

    this stanza is great, I dunno what it is about it, but it screams pain. well written.