Wow this is amazing i can totally relate and i'm sure many other people can too

this is really good you have talent please keep using it :)
-Angel

Wow this is amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thanks(:

Iknow exactly how that feeling works great job 5/5

Thanks

Hey...that was touching ''Do they know ?'' the manner with which u arranged the rhyme nd wrote,that was amazing !
It was really very delicate by the way u filled ur emotions and expressions.The end u made was also impressive....Great work !

Thank you so much

Great poem, i like the way you expressed your feelings by making clear points, good job :)

I really love this poem and there definitely comes a time when you just feel so damn weak that you don't really care who sees what.. that is why I connect with the last lines very well, thats the moment you can try to fight against these feelings, even though you feel so weak. . . but I get this poem a lot, well expressed. . . . . . for unknown pain. Keep writing :)

Definitively a good poem. I believe things shouldnt be left inside because at some point our body won't be able to hold them and they are Just going to explode without control. So that's why I think it's important to slowly take them out. :) really good piece.

Thanks guys(:

Very sad but beautiful poem...
Great!

Steven

Great writing!! i love your style :]

yes its easy to fake a smile but pretty soon u start breaking down

great job

5/5

Thanks, and it is. I know.