This one is amazing ..dear..

This one is amazing ..dear..

I feel you on this one

I liked it.Almost all here said they write what they feel.You are the first to say that you sometimes write for fun and creativity.

Wow, Kristian... this poem is so powerful and really touched me. I think everyone on this site can relate to this, since we all write poetry and we have different reasons for writing, but mostly it's to express our emotions. I really love this poem, you've written amazing imagery and I was captivated from start to finish.

This poem is perfect and great! I have one suggestion:

"Sometimes I wanna feel numb"
>>> how about you change 'wanna' to 'want to'

Other than, amazing!! Great job hon!

Oh brilliant hun,

Sometimes I write
just to stop crying
and sometimes
I write just to stop feeling.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
I feel like this sometimes to when writing. It's like the emotions need to be let out so we can begin to feel normal again. The pain releases within the pen / paper or typing and it feels a little better for a moment.

Awesome poem

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