Comments : I hear the Goddess

  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    "I hear the Goddess,
    drinking my sisters' wine.
    Love permeates every pore
    of my being, the power is here.
    the power is mine."

    There is so much strength in this stanza, powerful wording with a magical touch

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    I love the tone and the flow of this piece.
    The following is my favorite stanza

    "I hear the Goddess,
    Two perfect words I have:
    Perfect Love and Perfect Trust.
    I am at one with the divine.
    I am stardust."

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    Karla,

    You are a Godess :D

    I love this poem it's so free and majestic!

    x

  • 12 years ago

    by Timothy

    Wording is doubtless wizardry! Each stanza was perfectly cajoling and hypnotising.

    "Cast the circle, let the world stay out
    my spirit is in ecstasy:
    a world within, a world without."

    This stanza deserves undeniable credit. It also gives me an insight into your wonderfully mystical personality. Magical.

  • 12 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    One word comes to mind~ Beautiful!!! very pretty Karla, I love it~

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    Karla, I know you are faithful and it just appears in this poem. Great one.. great descriptions, and the repetition line is melodic :)